Our Verbal Identity
Our tagline connects us with our audiences with a short, memorable set of words that help set expectations of what an Oklahoma experience is like. “Imagine that” is an expression that universally represents surprise while inviting audiences to dream of their own personal opportunities. While your marketing efforts may incorporate various themes and messages, “Imagine that” is the only tagline that may be used across the state for external communications. It can be used within headlines, in body copy or as a sign-off. It cannot be used alone as the headline.
Example usage:
Externally-facing applications such as advertising, collateral, posters, websites, trade show materials, videos, and interior facility signage. For more information on applying the tagline, see Our Tagline in the visual identity section.
Messaging
Messaging is comprised of the essential ideas audiences need to know about Oklahoma. It informs the words you choose, but it is not meant to be copied directlyinto your communications. Below are the three key messages about Oklahoma. You can use all of them or only one, depending on the requirements of your brief. It’s up to you!
Key Messages
Tone of Voice
While Messaging is what we say, Tone of Voice is how we say it. Below are voice principles and corresponding writing tactics to help you communicate in the new brand voice. The Overarching Voice Principle gives you a high-level feeling of our “sound”, while the Voice Principles and Writing Tactics that follow give you more concrete guidance.
Overarching Voice Principle
We are about action.
We respond without hesitation: we work together facing challenges and solving problems with gusto. We’re intimately involved in our communities and genuinely concerned for each other, including all Okies and new fans/transplants.
Voice Principle
Some say we don’t like to brag, but we’ve got some powerful stories to tell. About our pioneering innovation. Our strength. Our resilience. We have a kind of swagger that’s contagious and inspiring. Our swagger helps others feel adventurous and upbeat.
Tone of Voice and Writing Tactics
The following internal-facing story summarizes the thoughts and feelings we identified through our research. We’ve included it here to help you get a good sense of the new brand, but this is not copy you would necessarily incorporate in to your communications. For our guidance on brand language, see the Verbal Identity guidelines below.
We Look Forward
Voice Principle
With our long history of people pioneering their own innovation, Oklahomans have every reason to see powerful opportunities in their futures. We imagine. We dream. Then we get that red dirt power moving forward towards success. From companies to musicians, artists, tech innovators and everything in between, we are all building towards a powerful future.
Writing Tactics for this Principle
- Try heightening anticipation in our stories and copy.
- Speak enticingly about what could be, and tempt people to see their own futures come true in Oklahoma.
- Rely on tangible, empowering and uplifting imagery to help transport your audience reader quickly.
- Use shorter sentences to get directly to the punch.
- Use historical references and track records to frame the possibilities of today.
We Are Authentic
We are exactly who we seem to be. We say what we believe. We say it directly, so we can get our points across simply and efficiently. If we’re going for a little humor, audiences can see the wink that comes with it. But we never say too much or speak without having something worthwhile to say. And we wouldn’t want to be perceived any other way.
- Hit the central point quickly and in simple, common terms. Avoid flowery language.
- Try reading your copy out loud or better yet, sing it as a country song to test whether it sounds authentic.
- Steer clear of hyperbole unless you’re using it for humorous effect.
- Use active voice as much as possible.
- If it doesn’t sound like a human would say that, don’t say that.
We've Got Swagger
Some say we don’t like to brag, but we’ve got some powerful stories to tell. About our pioneering innovation. Our strength. Our resilience. We have a kind of swagger that’s contagious and inspiring. Our swagger helps others feel adventurous and upbeat.
- Use the power of swagger to stir the emotions. Would your copy make a Ferrari blush?
- Use narrative that invites the reader to insert themselves into the story.
- Power doesn’t need long sentences. Brevity is your friend.
- Try short, declarative sentences and phrases to highlight that confidence.
- Use humor! Surprise people with your words, ideas, and sentence structure. Arrest them with your hum
We Speak As People
We communicate as vibrant members of our communities, sharing the goals and dreams of all those who live here. Supporting others’ dreams as much as we advance our own. The moment our voice seems detached from our audience, or from each other we lose our human connection.
- Use unifying language, like “we”, “us”, or “together”, to underscore our commitment to community
- Keep it simple but don’t gloss over complex ideas or important facts
- Your reader should feel like she’s speaking with a good friend that has invited you to a dinner among friends
- Try to refer to collective goals that are singular and relatable to all audiences
- Avoid using words that are charged and can be divisive. Err on the side of caution.
Before and After Examples
These Before elements of these examples are based on actual existing copy. The After elements give you a sense of how that copy might change once the new messaging has been incorporated. You’ll see the messages color-coded, with the legend below.
Note how not all messages always have to appear. Sometimes only one message is required. It all depends on the brief you’re working to. Immediately below the messaging examples are versions that reveal how the new Voice Principles have been applied. Again, not all Voice Principles have to be used for every communication. It's up to you to which ones to apply.
Commerce Example #1
After, with new messaging applied
Whatever Your Dream, We’ll Help You Build It.
Commerce Example #2
Whatever Your Dream, We’ll Help You Build It.
Community Example #1
Community Development
Build Something Great.
Build a Community.
Community Example #2
Community Development
Build Something Great.
Build a Community.
Tourism Example #1
Before
Whether planning a family vacation, a road trip with friends, or a romantic getaway for two, you’ll find that Oklahoma is home to an amazing variety of attractions and activities. Browse through our attraction categories to discover interesting new destinations and fun things to do throughout the state. Select a category below and begin exploring all the exciting things you can do in Oklahoma!
After, with new messaging applied
If all you see is flat land and red dirt, keep on driving. But if you happen to notice all our beautiful lakes, our Olympic-level riversports, our rich tribal history, our world-class performing arts and professional sports, our stunning wildlife and agriculture, our historic routes and peaceful national memorial, our exhilarating gaming and racing industry, and our thriving metropolitan areas….well, it seems we might have something for you to do around here.
Oklahoma. Imagine that.
Tourism Example #2
Whether planning a family vacation, a road trip with friends, or a romantic getaway for two, you’ll find that Oklahoma is home to an amazing variety of attractions and activities. Browse through our attraction categories to discover interesting new destinations and fun things to do throughout the state. Select a category below and begin exploring all the exciting things you can do in Oklahoma!
If all you see is flat land and red dirt, keep on driving. But if you happen to notice all our beautiful lakes, our Olympic-level riversports, our rich tribal history, our world-class performing arts and professional sports, our stunning wildlife and agriculture, our historic routes and peaceful national memorial, our exhilarating gaming and racing industry, and our thriving metropolitan areas….well, it seems we might have something for you to do around here.
Oklahoma. Imagine that.
General Public Example #1
Before
After, with new messaging applied
Oklahoma Works is designed to increase the wealth of all Oklahomans through facilitating quality employment for workers and ready availability of highly skilled talent for business and industry. Oklahoma Works’ strategic priorities are coordinated by the Governor’s Council for Workforce and Economic Development.
Our state is only as good as our people, and if you’re looking for work here, we want you to succeed. Similarly, if you’re hiring at your business, we want you to find great people willing to work hard and help you succeed. Oklahoma Works has the resources and services to help ensure you can make it here, whatever it means for you, your business or your family.
General Public Example #2
Oklahoma Works is designed to increase the wealth of all Oklahomans through facilitating quality employment for workers and ready availability of highly skilled talent for business and industry. Oklahoma Works’ strategic priorities are coordinated by the Governor’s Council for Workforce and Economic Development.
Our state is only as good as our people, and if you’re looking for work here, we want you to succeed. Similarly, if you’re hiring at your business, we want you to find great people willing to work hard and help you succeed. Oklahoma Works has the resources and services to help ensure you can make it here, whatever it means for you, your business or your family.